Thursday, 12 November 2015

Fairy Tale script and reflection

Script:
Script

Narrator: There was once was a family of bears.

Shoug: Papa bear
Juhani: Mama bear
Farah:  and baby bear

Narrator: they were all about to eat their lunch, but their porridge was too hot.

Juhani: Lets go for a short walk in the woods 
Farah: yeah lets go
Shoug(in an annoyed voice): Fine

Narrator: just then a little girl named goldilocks came upon their house and hesitantly walked inside. She saw three bowls of porridge and went ahead and tasted all three.

Danish: This big one is too hot- this medium one is too cold but this small one, its just perfect.

Narrator: She finished the smallest bowl and felt very sleepy, she made her way around the house and entered the bedroom.

Danish: Ooh these chairs look amazing. 

Narrator: She tried the first one

Danish: This is too hard

Narrator: She tried the second one

Danish: This is too soft

She tried the third one

Danish: This one is just perfect

Narrator: As she was getting comfortable in the third chair it broke so she went in the next room and fell fast asleep on the bed.

Just then the three bears came home to find their house in a mess.

Shouq: Someones been eating my porridge 

Juhani: someones been eating my porridge 

Farah: someones been eating my porridge 

Narrator: The bears went into the next room and found goldilocks fast asleep.

Shoug: Who are you?

Narrator: when she awoke she was frightened

Danish: ahhhhhhhhhh

Narrator: she ran out the house and didnt stop till she came home

Reflection:
I think I could've improved this by making my voice a bit louder and clearer as I wasn't really clear in the recording. I also could've done a bit more sound effects to make the event a bit more realistic. In the recording, I should've altered my voice in such a way so that I could sound like a dad (older) and maybe even a bear.

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